amorite911's art Reviews on Newgrounds

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Persue comics

This is incredible, the concept alone could fuel a videogame, comic, or even film. No need to tell you to keep doing it, you're good at what you do. What you need to do now is show everyone how good you are.

TyraWM responds:

I wish so hard you owned some publishing company lol,
thanks manns :)

[Haunt]

Damn dude.

Every time you submit something, i fall in love with it but don't want to sound like a creeper so i don't say anything. I love haunt and this is an amazing model of haunt. i like how even though there is no color, you can obviously tell the difference from the smooth skin and the goopidy goop costume. I'm still working on that comic lol and I've been trying to learn from you and i have gotten a shit ton better. Thanks for existing man. keep doing your doings.

[Kratos Creates RRODs]

Woah woah waoh...hold up a second.

Why would you paint Kratos (from a PS3 exclusive game) on an XBOX?

Still really nice work. I like it.

Ricepuppet responds:

because the client requested it.

[Breath]

this is amazing

I love this, do you mind if i use some of your work as graffiti decals in a few video game levels?

Grigoro responds:

yep , whynot)

[Minecraft Creeper]

now i feel kinda bad.

i have a sign in front of my house that says "no creepers"

[Ex Machina]

I really like these

I love the shading and the eyes. Did you use chalk?
Anyway, i was wondering if i could use this, pm me :D

[Billy Mandy & Grim]

OMG

That is an amazing representation of them. Billy and Grimm came out amazing and Mandy did as well, but she doesn't seem hostile enough...you know? But hey, that could be just me and I won't lower your score because of that...It's awesome and i sincerely hope you color this one day.

SmokeryDots responds:

Now that you mention it, I think your right... Havent even thought of that.... Hehe. It got a bit late when I finished it. Must've been tired:-) lol.

Thank you

[Dream Healer]

not bad

but not magnificent.
The shadows seem slightly "free-balled" and not thought out much. (the staff could use a shadow)
Also the wind seems to be affecting some things, but some things it doesn't affect (the feathers dangling from the round part of the staff). If they're not feathers, you should give more indication as to what they are.
Also, this isn't a big thing but if you spent a little more time on it before uploading adding more to it, it could have came out better (you could have him standing on a cliff looking down onto a mighty kingdom or something)
It feels very bland.

TheL1st responds:

whats not helping the details is a very bad scanner
some of the shadows are planned out and more pronounced and others i agree aren't planned very well
I'm still working on being able to draw a human figure so i didn't want to over devote on something that had a very improper form

I do about a drawing per week day if i get the time, so keep checking in
and looking for improvements as i try to make them

I also have this issue with not knowing when ive finished an object so i end up over shading and it turns into just an inky mess, I am trying very hard to correct the habit be patient

thank you for the review
~ l1st

[H&H]

Wicked.

Wicked sick, man. Awesome.

[summoning the beast]

wat'd you use to color this??!!

the color is amazing, I love it. Especially the fire and embers. great work.

Zero-drk responds:

thanks :D
the colors are done in photoshop cs3